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Thursday, October 28, 2004

Drunken Pieces of My Wednesday Night 

Sounds of her laughter
echoing off the pavement
along the perimeter of the park

Jostling
unsteady
belt buckles
in the port o pot
stationed atop a parallel parked...

whachu call those things?
trailer?
hitch n' ride?

Comments:
Nice, I like the end a lot! Remember when you sent me an enlarged picture of me standing outside the outhouse at your commitment ceremony? :-)
 
Yes! I totally thought of that day when I saw that noisy john by the park. :-)
 
Giggle!!!
 
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